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Although we're apart,
no matter how far the distance,
in my mind and heart
we are forever in this instance:
We're locked in a passionate kiss,
running our fingers through the others' hair.

If I only had one wish
I would have stopped time right then and there,
but now you're gone to a far away place
and I'm still sitting here...

I'm always thinking of your face
but I won't cry another tear
since it can't bring you back
from your home in the sky.

I want to bring you back;
it's not that I lack the will to try
it's just that I don't practice necromancy
since I've read Frankenstein...

Instead I went down to the pharmacy
and I had them give me a line
of the strongest pill they own.

Now I snort it all up
and I reached for the phone
to call 911, but I don't pick it up.

I'm dying really quick
from an overdose.
It's not that I'm mentally sick,
I just want you close;
I want you by my side again.

Let it be heaven or hell,
suicide might be a sin
but it will do me well
if I'm able to see your face
and view your perfect smile.

I stumble and fall on my face
hoping to see you in a while.
Based on a friend of mine that died a year or so ago that I loved with all my heart. Oh I'm not suicidal or emo or anything I just felt like putting it that way since it's about how I felt when I learned about her death...

[EDIT] I've found that breaking apart my stanzas even if it's mid-rhyme works for me depending on the poem and starting each line with a capitol letter isn't the best move for some of them either so I changed this one around a shit-load and changed a good bit of the wording too. Also I made it critique-able.
This one isn't one of my spam re-releases, don't worry xD
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Maj0rMareMolester Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :D
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25kimmykat Feb 19, 2012
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